A good, short, sharp presentation grabs the audience by the throat and gets to the point fast. Then, when you have their attention, ask for the referral.
Don’t try to be cute or oblique, and you’re not telling a joke with a punch line at the end – remember you’re scrapping for your audience’s attention. Even if they look like they’re listening, it doesn’t take long for a person’s mind to go wandering.
Simple and succinct beats rambling every time.
A good formula is the proven AIDA principle – Grab Attention, stimulate Interest, create Desire and call to Action.


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